Asine Reference Art - Plz comment

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Very basic concept art of Asine, from my book series with , Tales of Atonement. Be on the look put for it Spring of 2012!

Basic lines inspired by Utena style art book art for Anthy
Character (c) me
Lines (c) me
Tales of Atonement (c) M.A.Bartsch

Please, tell me what you think. I would love feedback!

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Artists' Note: My favorite character from the first book. She came out pretty well, but honestly, not quite as pretty as she is in my mind. I tried. Her marking really is one of my claimes to fame with creativity. Her dress is very inspired by Utena art... I hope that won't be a problem later.