Simone Reference Art - Plz comment

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Very basic concept art of Simone, a female character from my book series with , Tales of Atonement. Be on the look put for it Spring of 2012!

Art referenced for pose and military garb from Full Metal Panic!
Character (c) me
Lines (c) me
Tales of Atonement (c) M.A.Bartsch

Please, tell me what you think. I would love feedback!

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Artists' Notes: *dies* This took SO much time, effort, research, effort... ;-; Her clothing was HELL, because I'm not used to this sort of baggy clothing, so I had to compensate my art style into clothing that I never use. Then, there was all of the weapons... again, a bunch of stuff I don't normally do. I do...swords, bows and quivers, exotic blades, etc... NOT guns and grenades!! On an up note, her heads were VERY easy, and the only issue was I kinda went herp-derp on the back of her nhair on the 'upset' head.

***UPDATE 12/19***

I figured out my computer hates me and saved this as a jpg. ;-; I turned it into a png, and tried to fix the colors, but some....just...I couldn't do anything... I'm sorry, Xu... Looks like I made your job harder...