Please, please, PLEASE, PLEASE comment!!!
Our modest preview, subjected for your enjoyment.
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Please, you have no idea how much I would love your comments and critique! (Just make sure crit is constructive, not insulting, guys! ) I hope it helps you to become more interested in the two characters, and further intrigued over the others! If it's met well, I might give one more of Caos and Drego's meeting.
(As a side note, I'm slightly sad we chose thid one, as it makes Madelyn seem a bit weaker than she actually is--it was a lot of emotional angst at that moment--but it shows lots of good stuff, so it was the best choice.)